I Need Help Fast!, PLEASE?? Options

[amity]

For English we read a book "Maximum Ride: The Angel Experiment" and we had a project over it. and I did it over last weekend. And she gave me pointers today and it's due tomorrow. She didn't liek the tite, it didn't go with the flow of the poem. She said somethign to do with choas, but I'm still have trouble. If any of you can give me help with a title it is greatly appreciated. And if you see an mistakes in the content of it. Since I don't know if you all have the read the book or not.

I'm having trouble with the 2nd stanza.. the "Man" doesn't seem to fit in how I want it to....

grrr. THANKS for the help everyone!!!!!!!
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Max, Fang, and Iggy
Gassy, Nudge, and Angel
Welcome to our home
Our nightmare none the less

We fight off Erasers
Get caught, and “Man,
When I section her brain”
“Is that really experiment 11?”

Flying hours upon hours
Saving the ones we love
“Take that! You scum-sucking jerks.”
Bombing the bad guys in our way

Finding ones we thought were -
Dead. “I missed you kiddo.”
“What fresh hell is this”
What is going on in our lives?

New York, a place to have fun
It’s “the world’s most amazing toy store”
I want this teddy bear so, “I asked her
To buy it for me, you know, with my mind”

“Six works of art.”
We’re all different, and unique
They’re “mutants. Just like us.”
We have to help them too.

Fighting off ones you used to love
To death - “I think -- I broke his neck.”
“You killed your own brother, Max.”
“The boy who was left behind.”

”You never know until you know”
Are we “too original for Hollywood?”
“No one love you more then I do.” Max
You’re here for the ride..”

“The incredible, indescribable,
Maximum Ride”
Saving the world
One friend at a time.

This post has been edited by amity: May 14 2007, 04:16 PM

[a-lee]

i'd say a few good titles would be

1.)Saving the world
2.)Whats going on in our lives
or
3.) One Friend at a Time

I've never read the book so i just thought i'd give you a little help even though i'm not sure it would be helpful........

[amity]

Thanks for your input! =] I recommend the book highly! It's great! And it would tell you what everything in the poem means if it seems a tad weird. lol

[Ang Monique]

Mutants Like Us
Too Original for Hollywood
Saving the World, One Friend at a Time
Diasporatic Relations