 I Knew You, I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!
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 May 2 2007, 06:40 PM
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Martina Expert  Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212  |
i tried my best on this even though at first i thought this song i wrote isn't that good and i still don't so i thought i give it a shot!! and see what u think! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) AND PLEASE DO NOT COPY MY SONG THANK YOU!!
I knew you written by: MANDA!!! you wonder why, i'm hurting inside, it is because you, broke my heart, once again, even though i thought, we were meant to be together, Chorus: i thought i knew you, for who you were, i guess i was wrong, and that makes me sad, that i am not with you, anymore,ooh yeah. Ever since we, have been apart, i felt like crying everyday, because i didn't, want it to end, because i loved you, so much, Repeat Chorus: This post has been edited by MANDA!!!: May 2 2007, 06:40 PM |
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May 3 2007, 09:53 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
i know this isn't good! u guys don't have to read it!! just thought i say
This post has been edited by MANDA!!!: May 3 2007, 09:53 AM |
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May 4 2007, 03:06 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
my next one will be better then this one! PROMISE!!
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May 4 2007, 05:24 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 80 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Little Town Mississippi Member No.: 50 |
hey its pretty good better than my song first song good job on ur first song though..
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May 4 2007, 05:34 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
THANKS!!
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May 9 2007, 03:16 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 262 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
not bad, not bad!
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May 9 2007, 03:31 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
thanks! a-lee!!
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May 9 2007, 03:33 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 262 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
your very welcome!
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Yesterday, 07:34 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 171 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Long Island Member No.: 264 |
cool
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Today, 07:59 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 495 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
thanks!
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