This song is deciated to someone i care about and is not here anymore and it makes me sad that she isn't! And this was a hard song for me to sing!! I hope you like it and please don't copy my song!! thanks!!



I miss you
written by: MANDA!!!


Ever since you have been gone,
i have been sad,
that you are not here,
to make me laugh,
to make me smile,
but even though,
all i think about,
is you,

Chorus:

I wish you were here,
to see my dreams come true,
even i know,
you have been,
watching over me,
but i still miss you.

Everyday i think about,
all the good times we had,
and everytime i think about,
the wonderful moments we had,
i would shed a tear,


Repeat Chorus:

very sad yet very good!
i love the raw emotion in the lyrics!
great job! your gonna be BIG girl! I can feel it, your gonna be BIG! LOL

thanks a-lee!! U ROCK!!

i know, i know! thats what they tell me!! LOL (just joking!)

HA HA!!

I like it..it's raw, and that's what makes for a good song. But, try to use a little more originality to make it a GREAT song. You know..I call them "dead words" - I never use words like sad, bad, etc. Cause those words are too common! LOL.

LOL!!! and thank u!

Just to show you what you can do without the "dead words" or plain words...this is what I came up with for the first verse.

Ever since you have been gone,
I've cried my eyes dry,
Cause you ain't next to me,
You can't hold me so tight,
I used to laugh, I used to smile,
But I can't when you're gone,
And a part of me died inside..

I dunno...you don't have to like it, lol.

i like Florida Girl!! THANK U!!!!! can i use it!!?

Haha, no prob. Sure...just make sure you credit me, too. Haha.

I SO WILL!!..

here it goes...

and i also give all the credit to flordiagirl for the excellent lyrics!! YAY!!


thanks!!

i will also keep mine and still use it!!!! but no problem for a change!! HA!

I am still using mine! i will just use 2 songs on this!!..or whatever..haha

ya know!! i feel really guilty for stealing someone elses lyrics that they gave me!!..sry!!

BUT IT IS GOOD!!!

and thanks for the idea!!

lets just say that it is really hard because my lyrics are good and so are yours!!!

florida girl-
love the tip you gave her, the lyrics you came up with were really good too!
BRAVA(sp?) to you

hey a-lee!!

i love her lyrics too!! JUST LOVE IT!!!