 Immune To Help, i was having a REALLY bad day
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 May 8 2007, 03:43 PM
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Martina Expert  Group: Members Posts: 264 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22  |
Verse 1
A gray cloud ponders over ones head a battle no one knows about you cant see the tears i shed I've tried but just cant work it out an okay pretender is all i am just one person in a great disguise my heart is a bottled up traffic jam that lets loose the pain through my eyes the tension builds up and doesnt let go until i feel safe and secure behind close doors where no one knows of this battle I'm loosing for sure Chorus I'm scared to let go but even more scared of myself i'm melting inside yet immune to help, so immune to help Verse 2 A black shadow is caste acrossed everything I've tried to do I should have known I was already lost when I tried to start anew twisted, curved, and going slow that describes me perfectly I've sunken to the lowest low confused, the epitome of me If I cant look inside then where else do I run to there is no place else to hide there is nothing else to do (chorus) Break Down deep, deeper than anything a black hole sucking in a twister with winds so high here we do again, here we go again (chorus) hope you like it! |
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May 8 2007, 04:17 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 264 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
no one wants to read it?! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/sad.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)
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May 8 2007, 04:57 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 500 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
i do! I LOVE IT!! good job!!
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May 9 2007, 12:14 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 274 Joined: 3-April 07 Member No.: 146 |
Really good - I like the line "my heart is a bottled up traffic jam" - So true, I feel like that sometimes!
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May 9 2007, 02:51 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 264 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
thanks so much guys! glad you liked it!
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May 9 2007, 03:19 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 264 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
i may be posting the first song i've ever truely written for my band a couple years back! i was 12 i think!! my band broke up!
i love the song though! comin' at you soon! |
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May 10 2007, 03:13 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 264 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Rochester, NY Member No.: 22 |
I'll hurry with those lyrics...or i'll try!
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