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DaynaJones
postApr 18 2007, 05:01 PM
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I'm actually still working on this.. I need a bridge.. but I'm working on it..

WHERE YOU ARE
by Dayna Jones
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Dear Mom, how are you today?
Are you feeling good?
I want to tell you that I'm doing fine
I put my toys away, like I should
and would that make it okay?
For me to come home to stay?

Where you are is where I want to be
Wrapped in your lovin' arms and be a family
and you'd see, you're all I need
I often wonder why you went away
and i can only see you now on certain days
but you believe, its best for me
how do you know whats best for me?

Dear Mom, I miss those things you did
Every day and night.
Like how it felt for you to tuck me in
before you turned out the lights.
And now I'm dreamin' of you and me
and how were supposed to be

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INSERT BRIDGE HERE (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

chorus

Dear Mom, how are you today?
Are you feeling good.

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I will post a video of it later- like next week when I get some hi-speed internet (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) and when i finish the bridge
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DaynaJones
postApr 18 2007, 07:12 PM
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A little background i guess to the song.
I was inspired by a student in foster care.. mom doesn't want her apparantly..how sad.
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postApr 18 2007, 09:38 PM
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Oh boy. That made me shed a few tears. My parents are fostering, so I've seen firsthand what kids have to go through, even at 2 years old.

Love the song. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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postApr 19 2007, 01:23 AM
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wow, very nice. You have a gift girl!
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postApr 19 2007, 08:34 AM
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Great song.
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postApr 19 2007, 09:50 AM
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good job!
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postApr 19 2007, 02:17 PM
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I love it! Clever and sweet! Great job!!
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postApr 19 2007, 05:21 PM
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You have NO IDEA how much I just cried. A few people on the board would understand, but I was given up...
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postApr 19 2007, 06:26 PM
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Sorry if it upset you.. i just see her everyday and wonder what she thinks about....
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postMay 2 2007, 06:40 PM
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I'm thinking about changing the title to "Best For Me"
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postYesterday, 08:01 PM
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QUOTE(N3wY0rk_Hick @ May 26 2007, 08:19 PM) [snapback]22585[/snapback]
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what??? this stuff is on a number of your posts...
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