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postApr 4 2007, 09:54 AM
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I wonder
Written by: MANDA!!!


All I wanted to do was to make you smile
and laugh,
And I was trying my best to make things work,
But I guess you didn't care,
Even though you cared about me,
And I wonder why it wasn't good enough,
For you to care,


Chorus:

I thought I found the right guy but I was wrong,
Now my heart is broken,
Although he's gone I still hear his voice in my head,
And I wonder if sometimes,
Do I ever cross his mind,
And I wonder if sometimes,
If true love I'll ever find again,
And as I listen,
To the rain and thunder,
I wonder, oh I wonder.


Here I am sitting in my room,
Wondering if you are going to change,
Your mind about me,
Sometimes I wonder if you loved me,
And if you will ever change anything,
About you,
To make me come back to you,

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postApr 4 2007, 10:01 AM
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please tell me what u think!!!!
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postApr 5 2007, 03:29 PM
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no one wants to read!!
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postApr 5 2007, 03:32 PM
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I really like it! Is it up tempo or a slowish ballad?
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postApr 6 2007, 01:09 PM
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I really like the lyics alot!! Great job but I cannot pick up on a tempo.......
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postApr 7 2007, 01:28 PM
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Great job
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postApr 7 2007, 02:14 PM
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thanks so much everyone!!!!
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postApr 13 2007, 09:45 AM
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umm...this song i wrote is a slow song so yay!!!

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postApr 13 2007, 12:21 PM
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nice lyrics
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postApr 13 2007, 03:14 PM
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thanks so much!!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)
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postApr 13 2007, 03:16 PM
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very cool-
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postApr 13 2007, 03:26 PM
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thank you!
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postApr 16 2007, 12:26 PM
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I like it it sounds like a fun song.
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postApr 17 2007, 09:22 AM
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thanks!
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postApr 25 2007, 12:17 PM
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I like it. Very cute! Do you have music for it?
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postApr 25 2007, 02:57 PM
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well i have it in my notebook!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/cool.gif)

and thank u!!!
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postApr 25 2007, 03:04 PM
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and.....but i don't have music for it!
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postApr 25 2007, 05:22 PM
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oh! i forgot to say that i will be posting a new song soon!!! so ya!
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postApr 25 2007, 06:04 PM
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and PLEASE!! do not copy this! i am going to use this song if i ever become a country singer!!! PLEASE!!!! do not take this so i can record this myself whenever i get a chance! thank you!!
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