 Butterflies, Song about children
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 Apr 21 2007, 09:02 PM
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Martina Fan  Group: Members Posts: 1 Joined: 21-April 07 Member No.: 593  |
Butterflies
Author Carrie Rogers Copyrighted Running through fields catching butterflies with nets Momma can we keep them in a jar beside our bed I think they'd be happier if you would just let them go They need to spread their wings and fly Chorus The lessons we learn through our children's eyes The promise of hope that they give If we could just be like a child for a while What a joy, What a life that would be Little sticky hands holding tight to my pant leg Dirty foot prints on the floor after playing in the rain Moments took for granted that happen everyday Cause one day they'll spread their wings and fly Chorus Tag But Lord can I keep them in a jar beside my bed I made them to spead their wings and fly Chorus |
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Apr 23 2007, 08:37 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 576 Joined: 4-April 07 From: South Dakota - great faces, great places baby Member No.: 206 |
I like the fact that it is so visual, descriptive... you can really create a picture in your mind based on the lyrics.
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Apr 23 2007, 09:33 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 500 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Michigan Member No.: 212 |
i like it!
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Apr 23 2007, 11:17 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 117 Joined: 7-April 07 From: Pittsburgh, PA Member No.: 403 |
I love it!! Sweet, descriptive, and meaningful! Great job!
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Apr 23 2007, 03:50 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 226 Joined: 3-April 07 From: East Tennessee Member No.: 96 |
Oooo I likes it. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) GREAT JOB
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Apr 25 2007, 12:18 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 165 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Representin' fo' the F.L.A. Member No.: 64 |
Love it! Is there music to it yet, because I can really hear a tune in my head and played it on my guitar. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)
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Apr 26 2007, 06:20 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 576 Joined: 4-April 07 From: South Dakota - great faces, great places baby Member No.: 206 |
you can listen to it at www.myspace.com/beexalted |
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 May 8 2007, 01:28 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 50 Joined: 3-April 07 From: Calgary, Alberta,Canada Member No.: 156 |
Beautiful...i listened to it and it made me cry..keep it up. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/cool.gif) (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
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May 9 2007, 12:18 AM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 274 Joined: 3-April 07 Member No.: 146 |
Wow. Great words - Very descriptive.
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May 26 2007, 07:31 PM
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Martina Expert Group: Members Posts: 241 Joined: 4-April 07 From: Long Island Member No.: 264 |
HOTT
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